post 2 9/30

A very old man with enormous wings/ Reading

I liked the short story "A Very Old Man With Enormous Wings". It was a very good story, but it was a tad bit confusing. I could follow the story, but I didn't understand the plot line. I didn't like it when they locked him up in a cage. Just because he isn't like you doesn't mean you should treat him differently.


17 minutes reading and annotating "A&P"
23 minutes reading and annotating "Very Old Man With Enormous Wings"
60 minutes reading and annotating "Dry September"

A(n e) book

There isn't nothing that embarrassing in my literacy  narrative that is that embarrassing; besides me learning how to read when I was 7. I haven't said anything bad about someone and used their name so I think the names are fine in my paper. I think I might want to proofread it again, but I'm not sure. I think I should have made it more descriptive. I think if we didn't have to do MLA formatting, but I knew what it was I would have used it. It keeps it a lot more organized. I also think I would put some pictures to help with the visual elements.

Reading

Harrison Bergeron: 30 minutes 

Drive By Larry Byrd: 1 hours 20 minutes

Reading log

3 hours- Literacy Narrative 

Free Writing 3

          Yesterday, I went to my Dad's house for lunch. My grandparents where there along with my sister, my brother, his fiancé, and their baby. We had salmon, it was ok. We then watched the Ohio vs Louisville game on ESPN. I spent time with my grandparents who I see every couple years.

         After that, my niece got sick. She had a fever. My future sister-in-law said that it has happened ever since she started daycare. She took a nap and apparently was better. Her fever went down to regular temperature and everything was ok.

Reading Response 3

I am still reading Drive By Larry Bird. There still isn't much to say. It is an autobiography. There isn't a lot you can say about an auto-biography.

Drive By Larry Bird

121-175 2 hours