Wednesday, September 18, 2013

A(n e) book

There isn't nothing that embarrassing in my literacy  narrative that is that embarrassing; besides me learning how to read when I was 7. I haven't said anything bad about someone and used their name so I think the names are fine in my paper. I think I might want to proofread it again, but I'm not sure. I think I should have made it more descriptive. I think if we didn't have to do MLA formatting, but I knew what it was I would have used it. It keeps it a lot more organized. I also think I would put some pictures to help with the visual elements.

2 comments:

  1. Now its past the due date and I'm sure you made those corrections! keep working hard cookie!

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  2. Great post Carson! Im glad that you still think that you can improve on your writing.

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