My Research Paper
The thing I feel most confident about my draft is the detail that I have that can easily be found in my detailed outline. I am very concerned with my introduction and conclusion paragraphs I find those the most hard thing to write throughout the whole paper. So basically the things I think I have done well in my paper is my detail and the parts that I need to improve are my introduction and conclusion paragraphs.
I think I want to change my introduction sentences in my body paragraphs I feel that they don't work as well as other sentences could introduce my paragraphs. You should focus most on my body so that I can correct that because I already know how bad my introduction and conclusion paragraphs are. The paper as a whole I feel very confident about and can make this into a very successful paper
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