2/3 Research Paper

My Research Paper

       The thing I feel most confident about my draft is the detail that I have that can easily be found in my detailed outline. I am very concerned with my introduction and conclusion paragraphs I find those the most hard thing to write throughout the whole paper. So basically the things I think I have done well in my paper is my detail and the parts that I need to improve are my introduction and conclusion paragraphs. 

       I think I want to change my introduction sentences in my body paragraphs I feel that they don't work as well as other sentences could introduce my paragraphs. You should focus most on my body so that I can correct that because I already know how bad my introduction and conclusion paragraphs are. The paper as a whole I feel very confident about and can make this into a very successful paper

I accidentally made two blogs about my research paper:

In my research paper I feel like it has come along way than where I started. I feel what helped me the most was the detailed outline that I worked on very diligently. A lot of people worried about their rough draft and kind of just jotted down little things in there detailed outline. I put lots of details into my detailed outline and that made the rough draft a lot easier. I am also glad that I had chosen the topic that I had. There was a lot of sources that I could use and a lot of helpful information. I think that my paper will turn out very successful and will progressively  get better throughout my paper.. With these thought in mind I would like to possibly work more on my introduction and conclusion. These are the two parts of my paper that really I need work to improving.


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